Kia Ora today I will show you my postcard I made online pretending I was at the Treaty of Waitangi signing.My Goal is use own words and phrases to share thoughts and feelings & use a simple text structure which is appropriate to purpose. use personal voice to add effect & use a text structure that is appropriate to the purpose. I also made the stamp on a google drawing and I chose blue as the colour.
Here it is!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeleteHi Ava,
ReplyDeleteI like your postcard.the address is very cool!
what is your favorite bit of your stamp?????
from Nia
Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteI liked your postcard you made this week it was very good. Maybe next time you could tell us a little bit more about your postcard but other than that it was very good.
Good Job!!
Ari
Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteYour post Card is very interesting. I really like how you used the colour blue. Yes I have written a postcard before. I really like the address that you used.
Keep up the excellent work!!
Zoe
Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is very good and it explains a lot about the Treaty of Waitangi.
I love the stamp. -Chydale
Kia ora Ava,
ReplyDeleteyour postcard is amazing i really like the way you talked about how it was a beautiful day in Aotearoa. I also like that you have written the address that it was going to be sent to. Mabey next time add more information of the treaty getting signed but other than that this is really great. Keep up the good work!
-Neve