Wednesday, April 1, 2020
Ice Cream
Last night I got a little job, it was making new ice cream flavours! The first day at work wasn't that good because I got splattered with the ice cream I was making, it went everywhere even in my hair! I got splattered because I forgot to put the lid on the blender, whoops. The boss came in shouting a lot of rude words at me and I felt like the biggest loser in the world.
Now I need to impress my boss so I've created a new flavour called Chocoberry Swirl which is chocolate and strawberry icecream mixed together. When I presented it my boss was really impressed so he put me out on the street so people could sample my new ice cream. This is what I shouted... "ICE CREAM ICE CREAM ICE CREAM FOR FREE!"
Whoever sampled it said "this is worth a million dollars!" So now I've got a big line in front of me.
"I'll give you a whole cone of it if you give me ten dollars?" I said. In the end I did make about a million dollars and my boss was super impressed and paid me all the money I made. Most of it I gave away to KidsCan but I did buy a lot of chocolate for myself.
I hope you enjoyed my story about inventing a new ice cream flavour. What is your favourite ice cream flavour?
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Great writing Ava. I like the way you add your feelings in to the story. Your chocoberry flavour sounds delicious. My favourite flavour is boysenberry.
ReplyDeleteMrs Roach
Hi Mrs Roach
DeleteI've never tried boysenberry.
What have you been up to in the lockdown?
From Ava
Awesome Ava, Chocoberry swirl sounds so good. I think I would really like it - I like chocolate and I like berry - a match made in heaven - but I don't know that I would pay $10 for an ice-cream!
ReplyDeleteMy favourite ice-cream is boysenberry - same as Mrs Roach!
At least the people in the story would pay me $10!They really really liked it!
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Hi Ava my favourite icecream favour is cookies and cream. My dad just brought us boysenbery He got the wrong favour. from Zoe
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh whats up with people and boysenberry!Boysenberry Ice cream is Mrs Roach's and Mrs Earl's favorite Ice cream flavor.
DeleteYour friend Ava.
I know Boysenberry is popular. How our your hoildays going Ava. Your best Friend Zoe.
DeleteMy holiday is going quite well how about yours?
DeleteHi Ava, it's Connor here again. I really enjoyed your story about the Ice-cream. That Chocoberry swirl flavour sounds delicious. I would love to try it if it was actually made. My favourite flavour Ice-cream is Goody-goody gumdrops! Your story really made my mouth water. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWell you can make it all you have to do is mix chocolate and strawberry Ice cream together and "tada" you're done! I also love Goodie goodie gumdrops Ice cream!
DeleteHi ava I love your writing. and my favorite ice cream is chocolate. From
ReplyDeleteEmilie
Really that's one of my favorites also!
DeleteHows your holiday going?
I love your story Ava. My favourite ice cream is caramel.
ReplyDeleteI've never tried it unless its that one at mcdonalds?
DeleteHi Ava I like your story about inventing a new ice cream flavour. My favourite is raspberry and mango. From Indiana.
ReplyDeleteI've never tried mango and rasberry how does it taste?
DeleteHi Ava. My favourite ice cream is Mint chocolate chip. from Mila.
ReplyDeleteReally that's my Mum's
DeleteHi Ava you did a Really good job on your story mmmmmmm Chocoberry sounds soooo good. My favorite ice cream flavour would be Rainbow i'm not sure if you have tryed it but anyway it's really good.
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