Here is my plan and my recount about helping with my sister while mum was working. Before the lockdown I was going to go and help my aunty with her baby but I couldn't do that because we couldn't leave home.
Friday, April 17, 2020
Writing Create for Term 2, Week 1
My goal was Write about my PBL service as a recount
Here is my plan and my recount about helping with my sister while mum was working. Before the lockdown I was going to go and help my aunty with her baby but I couldn't do that because we couldn't leave home.
Here is my plan and my recount about helping with my sister while mum was working. Before the lockdown I was going to go and help my aunty with her baby but I couldn't do that because we couldn't leave home.
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Thanks for sharing Ava!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great looking plan, you have managed to answer all the 5 W's - awesome job! I bet your sister Isla enjoying spending quality time with you. Do you think you will help your mum with Isla often?
Miss Gill.
Well yes I have to help quite often because Dad is also having lots of meetings he works for Skope he buys fridge parts. Isla likes all of us being home she has no idea what bad things are going on in the world.
DeleteHi Ava
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing. You seem to be helpful around the house. Nice to see you have included paragraphs in your writing.
Miss Smith-Palmer
Thank you! Isla likes having all of us home!
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB AVA. FROM ZOE
ReplyDeleteWhat have you been up to?
DeleteHI Ava
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your clear planning and writing. I bet Isla loves playing with you and you have lots of good ideas for games. It's so great that you can help Mum and Dad when they are working and have fun at the same time.