Hi and welcome back to my blog here is my marshmallow poem about the senses
on the outside you look like
.a fluffy pillow you smell like: .heavenly goodness
.some still jelly .a sugar cube
.a powdery cloud .amazing just amazing
you sound like: you taste like:
.really squishy .sugary sweetness
.crackly fire .sticky like slime
.soft pillow .outside crackly
you feel like:
.
.a powdery cloud
.a dessert
Do you like marshmallows?
Hi Ave I like your work
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ava,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your blog this week. It was really good.
Maybe next time you could talk a little bit more about your poem.
Good Job!
Ari