Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Gill. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, August 6, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Ava
ReplyDeleteGreat work with your create task this week. It is clear that you have understood the learning intention and have laid this out in a way that is easy to understand. I like how you have included concluding statements at the end. Keep up the good work!
Miss Lover
thank you miss lover
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