Kia ora welcome back to my blog today I will tell you about what I have been doing for reading. This week for reading we have to make a book about gratitude or the happy brain chemicals I chose the gratitude because if you do the gratitude one it can be fiction ( not real ). I wrote my book based on Happy Right Now by Julie Berry. We have to show this to the youngest hub called Kakano and the teachers warned us that they will say what they think about it.
Here it is
What do you think of my book?
Kia Ora Ava,
ReplyDeleteI love your happy book. I love how you made like a house and put the characters instead of just doing a plain background. Maybe next time you could add a wee but more writing one each of the slides. I think your book has a lot of detail.
Keep up the great work!!!
Zoe
Hi Ava, you have put a lot of work into your Happy Book. I love the cool pictures which are really simple and easy to explain which is great for your target audience of Kakano. Each page gives you something to think about too. I’m sure Kakano will love it when we get the opportunity to how them.
ReplyDeleteHi Ava, this is an amazing piece of work! It is clear that you have put in a large amount of effort! What makes you happy?
ReplyDeleteHi Mr Trewin, Thank you for your comment. Dancing is the thing that me happy.
DeleteAva
Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteGreat work, I too love the cool pictures and your message is very clear. You have certainly targeted your audience, the Kakano students will love this. Very well done.